CaitE Baloney

Hey there, my name is Cait and I will be reviewing your story, Over all I think that you did a good job. It was a intriguing short story that ...

This is definitely a great chapter. It is not hard to follow although I do hope that you go more in depth about the main characters background so readers will ...

I really enjoyed that it truely makes you have to write because you want to beat the clock but also forces you to make something up on the spot and ...

I liked it and want to read more. You did a great job writing it I think that it catches the attention of the reader well but as ANate145 said ...

We were just talking about this in Biology class a few weeks ago. As for me I believe that they are alive. There are tons of rules and each has ...

I think that it depends on the person. Fear in general is a instinctual thing while people can become fearful of things because of something that has happened to them.

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You really should not be nervous because this was really good. I really wish you had posted more, as everyone else said. Also you should find a title for it. ...

I chose "A few characters and a vague plot" because I usually know what I am going to do but huge outlines bug me because it is not actually writing. ...

I liked it a lot personally. It was different and sad. A little confusing sometimes but then it all neatens out at the end. I loved the ending no matter ...

My favorite part about righting is the thrill I get at just plotting a story inside my head. I think that my life would be missing something if I didn't ...

I think that it has potential. The characters could use a bit of development but I am sure that that will come once you start writing the story more. Great ...

That was awesome I have not read anything like that on this cite. All I can say is wow. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great ...

Everything has basically been said but I would just like to say that I like this and will be whisked away onto the other chapters as soon as I have ...

Hey, I would just like to say that I really enjoyed reading that. Like everyone else said it was something different. Keep up the awesome work Cait :D